11/18論文修改重點

1. Introduction:
(1) Balance CAT的重點在short and precise,關於psychometric properties的描述則放在measure的部份說明
(2) external responsiveness的定義與臨床應用需再確認與補充
(3) predictive validity: prognosis的舉例說明
(4) purpose要寫得明確
2. Methods
(1) subject的部份要補上通過IRB的描述
(2) procedure: MO在admission和discharge時都有評估
(3) statistic analysis: external responsiveness的部分需再確認寫法
3. Discussion
(1) 把內容整合,主要分成三段
a. Balance CAT responsiveness和predictive validity的clinical implication
b. 與PASS比較的clinical implication
c. efficiency方面的clinical implication
(2) Limitation的部份改為兩個:
a. 需在results處補上BI的分數描述,才能在limitation處提及
b. predictive validity的limitation:將predict comprehensive ADL outcome改成predict IADL outcome---概念較comprehensive ADL清楚