3/6 comments for manuscript writing

1. Handout需註明要討論的段落是第幾段。
2. 英文口頭報告: guys為非正式用法，應避免。
PPT: 流程圖不清楚。
英文: each rater assessed a different patient需改寫;
in 7 day (小於等於七天);
7 days apart (大於等於七天)。
3. manuscript:
(1)第四段主題句中所指measure為一般的評估工具，所以要用a當定冠詞。
(2) In the (this) study可省略，因後有we found...
(3) ICC值要指明是屬於intra-rater還是inter-rater reliability。
(4) after considering the possibility for bias from an individual rater (e.g., rater's memory of the former score). bias為負面說法，會讓人以為較高的ICC值是高估的數據。
(5) 第四段少final statement。
(6) 第五段的主題句可再寫清楚些，如：A systematic bias was found between repeated assessments administered by the same rater as well as different raters.
(7) mean difference的比例要算出來。
(8) 第五段的結尾句:結果並非只有一個原因造成，需改寫。